The storm has now passed, the sun is out and power has stabilized once again. No major damage. Through the storm I decided to rewrite the first chapter. I'm much happier with this version, but sent them both out in an email to some friends for some outside input on it. See how that turns out. So far It's been a bit mixed as to which one they've liked better.
We'll see how it goes.
For now I'm going to continue on from the second version. Onto the second chapter!
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